
art by John Atkinson Grimshaw
They say we‘re naïve and we’re captive
In the rhythms and forms of the past,
That we’re stuck and denying the evidence –
Beauty’s a dream that won’t last.
No more sweat and forge in the fire of words –
It’s a prominent gap in the line,
A fraternity of emptiness with the tips of the swords
Just broken for what they cannot confine.
The beauty may be hidden and covered in mists
But in the heart of the poet, it forever exists.
Ca întotdeauna, ne răsfeți ! Ador acest poem !
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Ce onoare, multumesc! ❤
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Well, I actually knew you had a lot of beauty in your heart.
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I appreciate! ❤
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Ce-mi place asta cu “captivi in ritmuri și forme”… ❤❤❤
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Pai nu? 😀
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Tu ai dovedit că există, da 🙂
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Venind de la tine, inseamna mult. Din fericire, sunt inca destui care mai lupta pe vechea baricada – vorba vine. 😀 Nu e chiar o lupta indarjita, e o placere. ❤
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Superb!
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Multumesc mult! ❤
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Dacă poetul spune că suntem “naïve and captive in the rhythms and forms of the past”, cine sunt eu să-l contrazic?!
Sub o formă sau alta, trecutul se strecoară prin prezent spre viitor!
Este adorabil acest poem!
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Multumesc mult, Aura! ❤ Aici poetul spune ce spune lumea din jur 🙂 Dar da, nimic nu e static.
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Tare fain! Merci!
Poetul face dintr-un vers realitate,
prin conjugarea verului A Fi infinitiv.
Traind intens Cuvântu-n libertate,
se-nchide-ades în propriul vis captiv.
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Frumos!
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La multi ani, România si dragi români!
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La multi ani, Iosif! 🙂
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