A new and fresh poem I wrote, for all the friends.
What kind of proof do you still need?
You want the lights of paradise,
an oak too bold, too frail a reed,
a hand to hold, a roll of dice.
From days of old your paths still linger,
crushed and bitter paths of pain-
amazed and soft, of love harbinger
in deserts with the dream of rain.
We cross the roads of neverending
from dawn of world, to find what’s lost,
to find again the understanding,
to find the way that matters most.
Stop, friend and wash the dust away,
this day we stop just for a while-
we drink this water and we stay
in contemplation of a smile.
Parca are deja o melodie a sa. 🙂
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Ma bucur, inseamna ca am reusit ritmul! 🙂
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E super ca poti scrie direct in engleza, nici nu stii cand apare vreun muzician care simte ca mine si iti cumpara poemul pentru lyrics-urile lui. 🙂
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Ar fi ceva! Multumesc mult, Marius!
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Sună minunat, trezește multe emoții! Felicitări! ❤
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Multumesc mult, Oana! ❤
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Stop, friend and wash the dust away,
this day we stop just for a while-
we drink this water and we stay
in contemplation of a smile. – Pur și simplu MINUNAT!!!
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Ma bucur mult ca iti place. ❤
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Foarte mult!♥️
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Wonderful! ❤
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❤
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Este minunata! Felicitari!
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Multumesc mult, Eva!
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Felicitari, Ana! Foarte muzical poem!
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Multumesc, Oli! Te pup!
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Good job! Congrats! 🙂
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❤ Thank you! ❤
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Great! Just great! 😘😘😘
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Thank you, my dear friend! ❤
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Te felicit! Foarte bine scris!
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Multumesc frumos! ❤
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Cât de frumos! Felicitări!
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Multumesc! ❤
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Foarte frumos, Ana! Ești talentata și se simte o sensibilitate aparte în versurile tale.
😍
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Multumesc!!! ❤
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Ce frumos! Ai mult talent!
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Ma bucur ca iti place poezia! 🙂
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Wow! Eu nu reusesc sa scriu cateva propozitii corecte in engleza si tu scrii poezii! Am ramas fara cuvinte 🙂
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Ma flatezi, draga mea! Multumesc! ❤
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Minunat! Chiar esti talentata. 🙂
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Multumesc! 🙂
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Wow very mesmerizing and very nice poem !! just love it !!!!!!
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I am happy to hear that! Thank you!
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very good ❤
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Have a wonderful weekend, thank you!
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Apreciez că poți scrie poezii într-o altă limbă decât cea maternă, eu am avut o singură tentativă în sensul ăsta și știu că nu e ușor deloc. Felicitări și la mai multe! Condei ușor! Nu știu cum să-ți urez asta în engleză. May you have a winged pen poate? ❤ 🙂
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He he multumesc! Mai am poezii in engleza si scrise mai demult (in categoria My Own poems din dreapta le gasesti, ca sa le diferentiez de cele pe care la traduc). Cat despre urare, nu stiu exact! May your pen be blessed with inspiration from above! ^^
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O să le citesc. Cred că e mai bună traducerea ta, că presupune ajutor divin. ^^
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Reblogged this on adropofinspiration.
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Că e în romana, ca e în engleza, frumusețea și emoția e aceeași! ❤️
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Sunt foarte bucuroasa de apreciere! ❤
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